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Here’s a testimonial from Josse Tan, who runs a business in Singapore  helping parents of International Students gain entry into Government Schools. As you can see from her remarks, my ethos is ‘your project becomes my project’

 

Dear Victor 

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This is a sample of a Blog written by a non- native English Speaker – Hired on a Freelance Website. The content is unnatural and awkward. That’s why I was called into the project, to help out. 


 AEIS: What, When and How to Succeed
Posted on April 28, 2016 by xxxxxxxxxxx

 

If you’re a foreigner looking to enter your child into the Singaporean education system, there are a few things you absolutely need to know in order to put your best foot forward. Rated as one of the strongest countries in the worldwide education ranking, the Ministry of Education (MOE) in Singapore takes great pains in ensuring that international students are fully up-to-par before admitting them into any local schools.

What

In order to properly evaluate the knowledge base of the potential student, the MOE has come up with a centralized test that focuses on English and Mathematics – the 2 fundamental subjects on which academic success in Singapore is built on. This centralized test is known as the Admissions Exercise for International Students (AEIS). Specifically, the AEIS assesses the English literacy, numeracy and reasoning skills of each individual applicant. The AEIS has to be taken by every international student who is looking to place in a mainstream school.

 

 

 

 

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Ultimately, knowing how to navigate these waters may be a little taxing or difficult. The best way to move forward progressively is to utilize services such as ours. With our expertise and experience with helping international students attain positions in local mainstream schools, we are confident that we can do the same for your child. For further details or to have any of your queries answered, please feel free to contact us.


Here is the Same Blog, which I’ve re-written, but now in native English. You can see the difference immediately. 


 Take these Simple Steps to Enroll your Child in a Government School.

 

Dear Parents

Welcome to Singapore. We know that you’ve lot of important things on your mind right now. And enrolling your children in a Government School for their Primary or Secondary education is one of them.

So, we’d like to help you, by providing clear advice on how to do this.

What is the AEIS? – Your Child needs to Pass this, to get into a Government School.

Before you can enroll your children in a Government School in Singapore, your child must first sit a test, called the Admissions Exercise for International Students (AEIS). The test is for all students 7 years of age and older for entry into School from Primary Two onward.

The Ministry of Education (MOE) sets the test, and the two key subjects, which are tested; are English and Mathematics. Your child must have a working knowledge of both.

There are no exceptions every International Student sits the same exam. Therefore, if you want your child to receive the benefits from one of the best education systems in the world, in order to give them huge advantage in life, then it’s worth the effort to get them prepared, for this exam.

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How We Can Help you.

As you can see there’s quite a bit for you to do. But the most important part is to ensure your children are test ready. This is where we can help you the most.

We have some of the best and most competent tutors in Singapore, working with us. They specialise in helping students prepare for the AEIS. And they can help your children too. 

We have extensive in experience in placing International Students into Government schools, with our expertise and in-depth knowledge of Singapore’s Education System we’ll be able to help your children gain enrollment also, so that they can succeed in a highly competitive world.

Please call us on XXXXX, so that we help your child prosper in Singapore.